Hmm
Quite good dialouge, (yet unorigional), the graphics could of been dramatically improved by deleting all the lines in the back and foreground and maybe using some linear/radial gradients.
I did enjoy the little video clip and how it was shown on the screen as most people don't really edit/crop videos clips very well
This is your first (protected) movie so I'm going to say good work.
But you did Kill the strawberry which makes me cry
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- Sminoff Lock